Hey everyone, thanks for the patience! I just put up the newly updated chapter’s 4 text.

It’s very hard to accept and then implement changes like i’m doing, or at least, they are for me. It’s admitting I wasted time. Which is something that really gets to me. However: I don’t regret these choices to change things so far.

Plus, I’m not alone any more. I have help.

Further I’ve improved a lot on my writing approach so hopefully that carries over as the Ferrin grows and improves. (updates on chapter 2’s revision when available for patrons to come)